I will always know that he will be there for me,
Helping me make it through.
He is always here for me.
Yet if something is wrong he will know.
Daniel, You make me so happy, but Kelsey makes me happier.
You are just a great friend.
If you cannot believe me and not help me through things,
Then I don't see any other reason for us to be friends.
I have been trying to stay strong.
It hasn't worked yet.
I am starting to think that I wont make it through life.
Until she came along and saved me.
It is like those stories that say that you could of saved that person from drowning but you let them drowned.
At the moment, I have Kelsey here supporting me. Being with me. Helping me, holding me, trusting me, being herself around me, and a lot more.
She will always be with me.
I won't forget you, Daniel, it just seems like you want me to be invisible and just disapear sometimes and it hurts. A lot.
So I guess this might be my good bye.
I am sorry for every single thing that I have done to you in the past, present, and future.
This hurts me so much.
Nothing could hurt me as much as you have. I find everything in my life confusing besides Kelsey.
So I chose her, she is my choice. Forever more, Kelsey.
J. Straus ProductionsCompany
This is one of the most beautiful peices of work I have ever read.
ReplyDeleteI cried.
Tears of joy.
Excelent music selection too ; ).
I cried.
Tears of joy.
Jenny Anne Straus.
Live on and 4-Ever.
Because of you. I never strayed too far from the sidewalk. Because of you. Because of you.
Very. Well. Done.
ReplyDeleteI am a writer and critical analyzer for the New York Post in New York, New York.
Very. Well. Done.
Thank you.
ReplyDeleteJamie - Take a look at my first piece on here. That was my English final for last trimester. It would be interesting to get your point of view on that.
Jen,
ReplyDeleteAll I can say is wow. You're poems to me, are considered pieces of art. You have such grace and such passion when you write these poems, I can tell. When I read you're rose poem, it filled me up with hope and glee.
My dear child,
It is deathly hard to stay mad at that rose,
After a while dear child,
You will have to forgive that rose
This is one of the key elements of writing that many of us have lost today. It brings me so much happiness to see you use this significant writing style. Thank you for showing myself and others that this, this idea, this profound ability, is what makes writing a masterpiece. It would be really nice to write and significantly and possibly, publish you're artwork. Please keep in touch with me.
- Jamie -
New York Post
New York, New York
Jamie -
ReplyDeleteIs it possible that you could post one of them in the New York Post and send me a copy via email? That has been my dream to have one of my poems in a newspaper.
Jen
Jen-
ReplyDeleteI will do my very best. Pick one of you're most creative and heart-filled poems and post it via blog. I will do my best. You are very inspiring. I will do my best. The New York Post is not just a newspaper, but a World Wide and Global News Broadcasting Station. Think about the choices you have here, and the opportunity of a lifetime.
- Jamie -
Jamie -
ReplyDeleteI think that my best writing is already posted. It is my first post, Jamie. One problem is that I don't live in NY. I live in Oregon. My best piece is That Rose. Could I get a copy of it?
Jen
Jen -
ReplyDeleteI apologize. My staff at the New York Post reviewed you're poems and basically stated that you're poems are terrible. I'm sorry. Keep writing and continuing with life, I'm sure later on in you're lifetime they will get better. Maybe. I shouldn't have given you credit for you're poems. They are innopropriate and show you're lesbian ways. I'm sorry. Keep writing! Hopefully in the near future you can become a civil rights woman and help weird tree huggers out with life! Keep writing and contact me when you're poems are not "terrible."
- Jamie
Jamie -
ReplyDelete*sigh* it is alright.
There is one that I haven't posted yet about my middle school years. My English teacher said that it would be amazing to be published.
I don't want to push your staff though.
I am posting it soon.
- Jen
Jen-
ReplyDeletePlease post it as soon as possible. I have faith in you. Please give a presentation in you're english class. Tell them who I am and why I'm asking you to give you're poem to the class. Have the class take a vote to see if it is good enough. This we call, self-decision. We do this in the NY Post to see if an article is good or not. Give me the feedback and post you're poem tomorrow. Thank you. I have faith.
- Jamie
It is the most recent post, Jamie.
ReplyDeleteRead it.
Jen